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slide 1-add 2 spaces between poerty. An...
slide 2-paragraph 2- last words: unwilling to use public systems (make plural)paragraph 3- change final part of sentence to read: further targeting of their family or community because of race, poverty or politics.delete public systems strand..and add: g5 is committed to solutions that people will use and that are effective in their families and communites.
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slide 1-
add 2 spaces between poerty. An...
slide 2-
paragraph 2- last words: unwilling to use public systems (make plural)
paragraph 3- change final part of sentence to read:
further targeting of their family or community because of race, poverty or politics.
delete public systems strand..and add:
g5 is committed to solutions that people will use and that are effective in their families and communites.
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